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James N. Calloway
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Pieces of the Puzzle

Published Last activity 9 Nov 26 at 05:26 AM

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Genre: Modern/ContemporaryGenre: Psychological/PhilosophicalRated - Wholesome/All-AgesSoloWriting - General

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Solo RPperceptivenessanalytical mindpeople-watching

The coffee shop was busy, but not loud. It was one of those places in Manhattan where people came for coffee, stayed for an hour and pretended they were not watching the clock. Laptops were open on almost every table. Phones were lying beside coffee cups. Conversations were kept low, as if everyone had something important to say but did not want anyone else to hear it.

James N. Calloway sat near the window with a cup of black coffee in front of him. He had been there for almost forty minutes. He had not done any work. He had not answered any emails. For once, there was nowhere he needed to be. He simply watched.

People were interesting. Most of them believed they were difficult to read. They were not. They gave away small things all the time. The way they held their phones. The shoes they wore. The way they looked at the door when someone entered. Most people simply did not pay attention. James did. His eyes moved across the room.

A woman in her early forties sat at a small table near the wall. She wore an expensive dark suit, simple jewelry and shoes that looked uncomfortable but expensive. A business magazine was open in front of her. She looked like someone who had a meeting later that morning. But she had not turned a page in almost ten minutes. Instead, her fingers kept moving over her wedding ring, twisting it. Every few minutes, she looked down at it. She was not thinking about another man. That would've been the obvious conclusion for most people. No, she was thinking about taking it off. 

The expensive suit suggested that she had a successful career and could probably support herself. Her wedding ring was plain, but the watch on her wrist was not. She was not afraid of losing financial security. She was afraid of making the decision. James watched her turn the ring once more. She would probably go home tonight and have the same argument with herself. Not today. Maybe tomorrow. The woman turned a page without reading it. James looked away.

His attention moved to the young man behind the counter. The barista looked exhausted. He was probably in his early twenties. Dark circles showed beneath his eyes. His hair had been cut recently, but not by a particularly good barber. His apron was clean, though there was a small coffee stain near the pocket. College student. James noticed the textbooks stacked underneath the counter. The young man had tried to keep them out of sight. That told him enough. The university logo was visible on one of the books. The same logo appeared on the sweatshirt the barista wore underneath his apron. He was working to pay for college. His coffee order during his break was not coffee. It was an energy drink. That told James even more. He was working too many hours. Probably not because he wanted to.

James watched him check his phone when the line became shorter. The screen showed a message. The young man's expression changed for only a second, the look on his face becoming worried. Then he put the phone away and went back to work. His shoulders looked like they were carrying the weight of the world. Rent, James thought. Or tuition. Possibly both.

At the table next to the window, a man in his thirties was working on a laptop. He wore a wedding ring. He also wore a suit jacket with jeans and sneakers. Not a lawyer, James decided. Probably something in advertising or technology. The laptop was expensive, but the case around it was old and scratched. He cared about what was inside, not how it looked. His coffee had gone cold, but that went unnoticed. Every few minutes, he opened his phone, checked the screen and put it down again. It was obvious that he was waiting for an important message. Just a few moments later, a soft ‚ping‘ sounded. The man read the message and smiled. The man looked relieved. An important piece of news related to his job, James thought. 

He returned his attention to the room. At another table, two men were having a quiet conversation. One was talking. The other was listening. James found the second man more interesting. He barely moved while his friend spoke. He nodded at the right moments, but his eyes kept moving around the room. James studied him. Military? Security? Police? Perhaps. But there was something else. The man's shoes were practical. His jacket was plain. His watch was cheap but durable. Nothing about him suggested that he cared about appearances. His posture, however, was too controlled. He had spent a long time learning to watch his surroundings. Maybe simply a man who had learned not to trust people. There was no way to know for certain.

That was the problem with assumptions. They were useful. But they were not facts. James looked around the coffee shop again. A man reading a newspaper had turned to the same page three times. He was not reading. He was waiting. A woman with a laptop kept checking the reflection in the dark window instead of looking directly at the entrance. She was expecting someone. A couple sitting near the counter had been arguing before James had arrived. They were no longer speaking to each other, but both kept moving their coffee cups closer together without realizing it. They were angry. At the corner table, a young man was pretending to work. His laptop screen showed the same document for twenty minutes. His phone was hidden beneath the table. He was playing a game. James almost smiled.

There were hundreds of stories in the room. People came into places like this thinking they were invisible. They were not. Everyone left traces. A tired face, a wedding ring, a coffee gone cold, a phone turned down, a suitcase packed too carefully. Small things. Most people ignored them because they were too busy thinking about themselves. James had always found that useful. For a moment, he wondered what someone might conclude about him if they were watching closely enough. Expensive watch. Good shoes. Coat that had cost more than most people in the room probably wanted to spend on a month's rent. A man sitting alone in a coffee shop in the middle of Manhattan.

He stood, left a generous tip on the table and walked towards the door. Behind him, the coffee shop continued as if nothing had happened. People kept talking. People kept lying. People kept making decisions. And James kept watching.