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Submersion Point

Published Last activity 15 Oct 25 at 03:42 PM

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Rated - IntenseBio & BackgroundsGenre: Military/StrategyGenre: Thriller/SuspenseSoloWriting - MSL

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James SterlingDanny Hernandezunderground facilityflooded missionextractionstormdam collapsefirefightnear drowningrescuebio dataPavel Sidorov

Rain pounds the valley, a solid curtain of water that hides the dam until they are almost beneath it. The floodlights flicker, white beams cutting through the storm. James and Danny crouch on slick rock above the spillway, peering through scopes at the service entrance below.

“On your go,” Danny says, voice steady over comms.

James clips in and rappels first, rope sliding through his gloved hands. He lands quietly, boots splashing against the concrete base of the dam. Danny follows, dropping down beside him with practiced precision. The two men press to the wall and move toward the door.

The keypad is old, but the added tech is new. James connects a bypass device, watches the light on the screen pulse green, and pulls the door open.

Inside, the tunnel smells of rust and cold water. The floor vibrates faintly with the sound of turbines somewhere below. They move in formation, rifles up, scanning every shadow.

At the stairwell, water drips from the pipes above. Danny leans over the rail. “Already flooding. Not bad yet.”

James checks his watch. “Won’t stay that way. Let’s get it done.”

They descend in silence. On the third landing, muffled voices echo up from below. Two guards. James signals. The men move down the steps. Two silenced shots, and the guards slump without a sound.

They find the server room at the bottom level. The lab looks half abandoned, metal racks and patched cables running everywhere. James cuts the chain on the equipment cage. Inside, the drives blink red in the dim light. He packs four into a waterproof case, each one labeled with a different project code.

“Got what we came for,” he says.

Then a voice trembles from behind a stack of boxes. “Please, don’t shoot.”

Both men swing their rifles toward it. An older man steps into view, soaked lab coat clinging to his frame. His ID badge reads Dr. Pavel Sidorov.

“I was forced to work here,” he says quickly. “You must leave. The structure is not stable.”

Before either can respond, the entire dam shudders. The sound rolls through the concrete like thunder. Lights flicker, then turn red. A siren starts to scream.

“Guess he’s not wrong,” Danny mutters.

They grab the case and head back for the stairs. As they climb, the noise of rushing water grows louder. By the first landing, a steady stream is flowing under the door at the bottom.

The door suddenly slams inward, and water floods in like a living thing. Cold and heavy, it slaps them off balance.

“Go!” James shouts.

They scramble upward, but the water is rising fast. Danny clips a carabiner to the railing, hooks Pavel to him, and nods to James. “We’re tied together. Move!”

They fight their way up the stairwell. The lights flash in red pulses, sirens echoing off the walls. On the next landing, two guards burst through a side door, firing wildly. Danny pushes Pavel flat and returns fire, dropping both before they can reload.

The concrete groans again. More water pushes in, swirling with debris. A toolbox floats past. The current drags at their legs. James spots a door at the top of the flight. “There!”

They shove through. The burst of water knocks all three of them into the turbine hall.

The room is chaos. Turbines grind and spark under the strain. Foam churns at the base of the platforms. Gunfire rings from the far catwalk. Three men are firing from cover. Danny and James return fire, picking them off one by one. A stray crate breaks free, hits the railing, and crashes into Danny’s side. The impact knocks him over the edge into the channel below.

“Danny!” James yells. He drops his rifle and dives after him.

The cold hits like a hammer. James kicks hard, scanning the cloudy water with his light. He spots Danny near the maintenance ladder, caught in a tangle of cables. The wires cinch around his leg, holding him fast. James reaches him, draws his knife, and cuts through the mess until Danny’s leg comes free. Danny pushes upward, gesturing for him to follow.

James turns to go, but as he moves, a thick cable loops around the valve on his tank and yanks him backward. He slams into the ladder, pinned hard. He tries to cut it, but the angle is bad. The cable only tightens when he moves. Air hisses through his regulator in short bursts.

Danny breaks the surface, gasping. He looks around, waiting for James. When he doesn’t appear, he realizes instantly what happened. He dives again, lungs burning.

He follows the strobe from James’s vest, finds him trapped against the ladder. Without hesitation, Danny drives his knife into the cable and starts cutting. The nylon stretches and frays. One more pull, and the line snaps.

James kicks free. Danny grabs his vest and drags him upward.

They break the surface together, gasping for air. James clings to the ladder, coughing.

“You alright?” Danny pants.

“Yeah,” James rasps. “You?”

Danny nods. “Let’s not do that again.”

They haul themselves onto the platform. Pavel is waving them over, shouting about more incoming hostiles. Bullets hit the water near their feet. Danny fires back in short bursts while James reloads. The turbines below start screaming louder as metal bends and the dam gives way piece by piece.

“We need to cross the hall,” James says, scanning for an exit.

Danny spots a maintenance cable stretched between two beams high above. “That’ll do it.”

James looks up at it, then back at the rising water. “You first.”

Danny clips his harness to the line, then Pavel’s. James goes last. They start moving hand over hand. The cable vibrates with strain, but it holds. Below, the water churns with wreckage. Halfway across, one of the anchor bolts snaps, and the cable drops several feet. Pavel yells, clinging hard.

“Keep going!” Danny shouts.

A guard appears on the far platform, rifle raised. Danny steadies himself, fires one shot, and the man drops. They keep moving.

They reach the far side. James lands badly, ankle twisting, but he keeps going. Danny smashes the exit door open with his shoulder. They rush into a sloped corridor that leads up toward daylight.

Water pours down behind them, filling the tunnel fast. The lights pop one by one. They push uphill, dragging Pavel between them. The tunnel shakes, dust raining from the ceiling. Then they see the light ahead.

They burst outside into the rain. The spillway is overflowing, white water tearing over the top of the dam. Their extraction point below is gone.

“There!” Danny shouts, pointing to a winding service road.

A pickup truck barrels toward them, tires skidding. A woman in a ranger jacket leans out. “Get in!” she shouts.

They pile into the bed just as the dam gives out behind them. The roar is deafening. A wall of water crashes down the valley, swallowing everything in its path. The driver guns the engine and doesn’t stop until the ground levels out miles away.

For a while, none of them speak. They sit soaked, shaking, breathing. Pavel hugs the data case to his chest like it’s a lifeline. Danny leans his head back, staring at the storm. James looks down at his hands, scraped raw, trembling with leftover adrenaline.

When they finally reach the extraction point, the helicopter waits in the rain. The crew helps Pavel aboard first. James and Danny follow, moving slowly. Inside, it’s loud and cramped, but safe.

Danny drops into a seat and laughs under his breath. Then in true, end of mission form: “Next time,” he says, “we pick a job somewhere dry.”

James sits across from him, too tired to smile but close. “Deal.”

They lift off. The dam shrinks behind them, still crumbling under the pressure. Neither man looks back. They sit shoulder to shoulder, drenched, silent, and alive.

Neither will ever forget the other pulling him out of the water.